Furrypaw/Furryclaw-Mountainclan

[furryclaw]

Name: Furrypaw
Age: 7moons
Gender: Tom
Clan: MoutainClan
Rank: Apprentice
Eye Color: Amber
Description:

Furrypaw his a very lond haired cat.His fur is pure black but white on his paws.He has a scar running across his muzzle from eye to eye.He has a very muscly body.He his a little on the small side and has sharp claws.

Personality:

Furrypaw is the same everywere he goes.He gets mad really easily and isnt afraid to speack his mind.Has a great sence of humor and respectful of the warrior code.He loves to fight and will never back down from one.He also usually goes head over heels into fights.

History:

Furrypaw grew up with his 1 older brother.Both his parants died of whitecough when he was first born.His older brother started to train him when he was two moons old becuace he was about to die.He tought him how to fight and hunt.He was exellent at fighting but not so good at hunting.When he was 4 moons old his older brother died of whitecough just like his parants.He was on his own now so off he went to find someother cats.

RP Example:

Sneaking through the undergrowth Furrypaw was trying to cach this plump squirel.He was just a few fox lengths away when something snapped a twig.He jumped at the squirel but was two late it had bolted up the tree trunk.He let out a yowl of frustration after he turned around but was cut of as a fox slashed a deep gash from eye to eye.Almost blinded he laid there on the ground as the fox crawled over him.Quuckly he took his hindpaws,clawsunsheathed and kicked hard at the foxes neck just like his brother had tought him.Luckily he hit the foxes neck and blood oozed out of it.Suddenly the fox dropped and layed their motionless.Still almost blinded he layed there to be woken up later by a strange group of cats.

[Tison ('tis Falcon)]

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