Post by Nighthunter on May 3, 2009 20:21:27 GMT -5
Name: Brokenglory(rogue)
Age: 33 moons
Gender: Tom
Clan: Rogue
Rank: None
Eye Color: teal blue
Description:
Age: 33 moons
Gender: Tom
Clan: Rogue
Rank: None
Eye Color: teal blue
Description:
Personality:
He has a very fluffy coat.His eyes are very unusual because they are a teal blue.He has the lok of a defiant and blood thirsty cat.He has a gray coat with some thin darker gray stripes.His right front paw is white.He has a blackish gray nose.
Brokenglory is a vengful cat.He is not very social, and he has a voice for attracting females.His voice carries authority, and he will never accept a leader without losing a battle to prove which cat is best.He hates most clan cats, but he will attack Fireclan warriors on sight.Deep down he does have a loyal heart of a warrior,if you can reach it.It is layered with ice after his years of hardship and misfortune.History:
At first he was a normal Fireclan kit.His family consisted of his father Stormstare, his mother Weepingheart, and his sister Featherpaw.He was very protective of his sister because she was smaller than him, and she always found a way to get into trouble.He on the other hand was a very withdrawn and dutiful cat.Other cats always ignored him because of his looks.The ways his eyes were colored and the way they made his expresions appear always did him disjustice.RP Example:
His mentor was a cat named Deepshadow.He was a very dark warrior that did not mind killing to get ahead.At the time Brokenpaw thought that he was just an adverage cat.Little did he know that Darkshadow and his friends Voletooth and Deepthroat would warp his life into on of misery.It would also determine his standing in the clan itself.
Darkshadow trained Brokenpaw in the ways of cheep shots,and to always take advantage of your opponent.He was almost constantly trained between the three warriors in battle training.They kept him secluded from his family, and when they trained it was with claws and teeth.Without knowing it Brokenpaw was becoming a blood thirstly killer, and the rest of the clan let it go.They believed that his eyes showed his true nature,but they really showed what his teachers were making him.A tool for the war that they planned to wage on the clans.He leaned his fighting techniques quickly, and his mentor felt him ready to fight for the clan.Little did he know that it was a trap for his family set bye these three cats.
He was told that there was a raid being planned against the clan and that betrayers from the clan were leading it.His mentor told him to not trust any cat even family,and he agree without question.Before he left to try and stop these cats his sister caught up to him.She had not seen him for quite some time because of his training, but she had a feeling that somehow he had changed.She knew that her happy and free brother was gone, or at least deeply hidden.When she asked him to talk about it he mearly said that it was none of her concern and that he could handle it.He vowed to protect her,and then left.
When he reached the battle field he was stunned.His parents bodies were on the ground still ozing blood.He was enraged and he saw a nearby forestclan patrol.In his rage he attacked the three cat, and killed a warrior.The remaining two ran off.He wallowed in grief over the deaths of his parents.
Determined to avenge them he ran back to camp to seek out his sister and tell her what had happened.The leader was impressed with his determination and gave him his warrior name.Brokenglory continued to search for answers,until one day his sister was out in the forest hunting with him.They were ambushed by his three teachers.He fought bravely but in the end she died and he was knocked unconcious.The three cats brought them back to camp and framed Brokenglory.When he awoke he was imediatly cornered by the clan.Still angry he felt that he could trust no cat, so he attacked them.He killed his mentor,but he was beaten by the rest.The leader blamed him and would not listen to him.He could see the monster he had become,and he banished him.
Brokenglory swore to avenge his family and that he would wage a silent war against all Fireclan.He learned something that day.If a cat isn`t better than you, then it cannot lead you.He has trusted no one since.
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