Post by Nighthunter on Apr 15, 2009 20:08:19 GMT -5
Name : Coalstar
Gender : Tom
Rank : Leader
Age : 30 moons
Clan: Lightningclan
Mate: none yet
Short description:Coalstar is a long thick coated black tom cat with small white patch on his chest an belly, and has piercing amber eyes.
Description: He is a black tom cat with a small patch of white on his chest and belly, and scars all over his body from previous battles with other clans. His fur is the thickest around his shoulders and neck. There are three long scars parallel to each other above his right shoulder and similar scars on his right hip. He has several scars from various bite wounds around his neck and back. On his tail he is missing a patch of fur near it’s tip. His chest has a long semi-straight scar going across it, starting from his left side towards his paw and reaching up to about his chin. A toe is missing from his front left paw, so there is a small scar there as well. Across hi right eye is another scar that looks almost like a claw, because it has a close to perfect curve. Compared to his other more noticeable scars the one on his nose is quite small. It is just a barely noticeable gash that goes right across the top of his nose.
A bite was taken out of his right ear making it resemble a shredded leaf. It hangs loosely compared to his other ear, which has no damage done to it what so ever. Piercing amber eyes are his most scary feature, and chill most cats to the bone. If there were ever a cat born with the eyes of a killer it was Coalstar.They are very focused and serious. His eyes are dark amber, and they also have a hint of yellow around his pupils. When he gets angry his eyes turn completely dark amber. He has long unusually black tipped claws and a long thick tail. He has a long thick pelt. He has a pinning stare when he is angry. He has a very long scar near his left eye. It runs from his chin to his ear.Coalstar has a very defined muscle definition, and he has abnormally thick and strong bones, making him look very large. His voice like most leaders carries authority, but his can shake a cat into submission. When he purrs which is very rarely it is usually at the expense of a cat disgracing themselves. He has the spirit of a brave an unrelenting warrior, and it may never be broken.
Personality : Coalstar is not the cat to ever upset. This is mainly because he has a fierce temper and once angered he rarely calms down quickly. As a kit he was actually very accepting of others, and he was always a sweet gentle cat. That all changed when he lost his family and got responsibilities put on his shoulders (see history) He has a lot of pride, which is why he often has his clan show there power, and he doesn’t fear anything, except the loss of a member of the clan.Eventhough he lost his family and his love was taken from him, he still wishes to have kits of his own. He believes that even he should be allowed to have another chance at being a father. He has a deep and unshakeable belief in Starclan.He respects his clan mates, but will attack trespassers on sight. He can be reasonable and will not endanger his clan. Despite his tough and somewhat dark attitude he cares deeply for his clan, and he will willingly risk all his lives to keep them safe. He often tries to display his authority and is usually the first to speak during a discusion.He does have a soft spot for she cats and kits, but usually avoid him because of his temper and the way he looks.Coalstar will often be the one that starts fights ,and it does not take much to provoke him. His pride in himself and for his clan is his biggest flaw. He will fight to defend them even over petty insults. This is the reason for his many scars all over his body.
History .Coalstar has a broken past and it all started as a kit. Even from this young age Coalstar had a really tough life. During the time when he was born there was a terrible prey shortage due to the Two legs and there monsters. He often went without food and even almost died at just three months old. When he and his siblings were apprenticed the Two legs rarely entered the forest, so prey was plentiful. His mentor was a powerful young she cat named Goldenclaw.She taught him to respect and fight for his clan even if he lost his life. They often spent hours training in the ways of hunting and fighting. His own siblings Gorgepaw and Loudpaw became jealous of the praise that the older warriors would give him, eventhough he never acted above them.
The other apprentices Smallpaw, and Leafpaw often shunned him because they were too shy to talk to him or they were afraid. Several moons later when he and the others had been just mere days away from becoming warriors. The clan was at war with Thunderclan during Leafbare.They had been fighting over Sunning rocks because it was a much needed source of prey. Many of his clanmates had fallen due to lack of food.Both his parents and siblings were fighting with him and Smallpaw,because they were all the clan could spare to fight at the moment.They were heavily out numbered. This was where his life changed forever. The battle became much worse and it was starting to turn bad for Lightningclan.His mother was fighting two Iceclaners at once,and she had taken a very bad belly injury. She was having trouble moving to avoid the two enimies.Her feet hit the slick ice and she fell. For a moment she tried to rise but then on of the enemies clamped there jaws on her neck.Her life covered the ground and she fell dead.Flamefang had looked over during his fight with a small she cat when he saw his mate fell. The furry that gripped his heart made him charge to protect her lifeless body. The same Thunderclanners that had attacked his mother went after his father, overwhelming him in seconds.He soon died from loss of blood.Coalstorm had watched as his parents died right in front of him while he was helping the other apprentices. Now him and his siblings fought with agony and rage that gave them strength. The same cat that killed his mother had bitten and torn his ear ripping it to shreads.Along with Smallpaw they threw back the attack, and returned to camp with their parents battered bodies. When the leader known as Stonestar announced this to the clan he also made them warriors for there bravery, and dedication to there clan.Goldenclaw congratulated them and sat vigil with him and the other apprentices. The very next day he went on a hunting trip with her. He looked at her with new eyes and saw how beautiful she was. They became mates, and he was starting to become happier, but then Leafbare became worse and many cats became sick. His siblings were the first to die from the disease. Next the leader lost a life and the deputy died from greencough. The battle with Iceclanclan became worse and Coalstorm fought often even if he was injured. The hatred for them won against his ability to stay put and heal.Stonestar lost another life to the furry of the Iceclan leader,so he only had three lives left. He gained many of the scars on his back from those battles. The new deputy died while fighting an enemy on patrol. The leader was in despair from losing so many cats, an decided to pick the new deputy later. Around this time his mate and former mentor was pregnant with her first litter.Coalstorm was so proud of his growing family.Goldenclaw and him went for a walk and layed against a tree with there tails entwined. He looked at her and smiled. Suddenly a badger appeared, and it was foaming at the mouth apparently awoken from hunger. It had attacked the two cats in a desperate attempt to eat. Coalstar had tried to fend it off but was almost clawed to bits bye its massive talons.Goldenclaw had also attacked it and threw his bleeding body aside and taunted it so she could lead it away from him. He tried to save her , but just as he bit its neck killing it its claws descended and tore threw her pelt. It dropped dead and Coalstorm stood over her broken body.He wept as he witnessed her blood drain into the snow. He dragged her back into camp and sat vigil for her despite his hideous wounds.Stonestar saw his dedication and had been impressed with him lately, so he ascended High rock and announced him as the new deputy at sundown. He had been training an apprentice named Skypaw.It was his first and only apprentice. She would always wander away from camp, and he caught her leaving a Two legs nest once. He gave her a choice and she chose to stay with them. Next to his other losses Coalstorm was not surprised that he would not have a normal apprentice, but he did not let that stop him from serving the clan.
Several years later the Two legs started to rip through the territories. The clans met at Fourtrees and decided to leave.Coalstorm was glad that the clan had chosen to leave.Remembering all he had lost had made his decision easy. They set out as one joined clan. They came to the first of a series of rather large Thunderpaths,and his leader was the first to cross. He walked out onto the path, and Coalstorm yelled for him to wait just as the monster hit him.Stonestar lay on the thunderpath as another life left him leaving him with just two.Coalstorm helped him off, and lead the rest across. They continued on and came to the mountains. A sharptooth attacked them killing Leafpelt and taking Stonestars last two lives.Coalstorm drove back the Sharptooth making him slip off a cliff to die on the rocks below.Coalstorm told his clan and became leader.
Rp example:The moon is high in the sky.Silverpelt can be seen clearly.Two cats are running towards each other.They clash with there claws unsheathed.They tear at each other relentlessly.There is blood lust in the bigger cats eyes.This is Coalstorm deputy of Riverclan.The other cat jumps away to try and catch its breath,but Coalstorm pursues him.The cat launches unexpectedly at Coalstorm and catches him off balance.The light of the moon shows the cats face.It is the deputy of Thunderclan Razorfang.(Razorfang)"You should leave and run back to your den while you can Coalstorm!"(Coalstorm)"Speak for yourself,because if you continue this battle i will show you no mercy."He pushes Razorfang off of him and then rakes his face with his deadly claws slashing and destroying his right eye.Razorfang runs for it calling the rest of his clan to retreat.Coalstorm announces the victory,and searches for his leader.He had lost track of him during the battle.He sees blood by the cliff edge and looks over.He sees his unmoving leader.He calls the clan and shows them.He collects his body and stands vigil for his dear friend and leader.He asends the Highrock and announces that he will become the new leader.With a heavy heart he retires to his old leaders den to think.
Gender : Tom
Rank : Leader
Age : 30 moons
Clan: Lightningclan
Mate: none yet
Short description:Coalstar is a long thick coated black tom cat with small white patch on his chest an belly, and has piercing amber eyes.
Description: He is a black tom cat with a small patch of white on his chest and belly, and scars all over his body from previous battles with other clans. His fur is the thickest around his shoulders and neck. There are three long scars parallel to each other above his right shoulder and similar scars on his right hip. He has several scars from various bite wounds around his neck and back. On his tail he is missing a patch of fur near it’s tip. His chest has a long semi-straight scar going across it, starting from his left side towards his paw and reaching up to about his chin. A toe is missing from his front left paw, so there is a small scar there as well. Across hi right eye is another scar that looks almost like a claw, because it has a close to perfect curve. Compared to his other more noticeable scars the one on his nose is quite small. It is just a barely noticeable gash that goes right across the top of his nose.
A bite was taken out of his right ear making it resemble a shredded leaf. It hangs loosely compared to his other ear, which has no damage done to it what so ever. Piercing amber eyes are his most scary feature, and chill most cats to the bone. If there were ever a cat born with the eyes of a killer it was Coalstar.They are very focused and serious. His eyes are dark amber, and they also have a hint of yellow around his pupils. When he gets angry his eyes turn completely dark amber. He has long unusually black tipped claws and a long thick tail. He has a long thick pelt. He has a pinning stare when he is angry. He has a very long scar near his left eye. It runs from his chin to his ear.Coalstar has a very defined muscle definition, and he has abnormally thick and strong bones, making him look very large. His voice like most leaders carries authority, but his can shake a cat into submission. When he purrs which is very rarely it is usually at the expense of a cat disgracing themselves. He has the spirit of a brave an unrelenting warrior, and it may never be broken.
Personality : Coalstar is not the cat to ever upset. This is mainly because he has a fierce temper and once angered he rarely calms down quickly. As a kit he was actually very accepting of others, and he was always a sweet gentle cat. That all changed when he lost his family and got responsibilities put on his shoulders (see history) He has a lot of pride, which is why he often has his clan show there power, and he doesn’t fear anything, except the loss of a member of the clan.Eventhough he lost his family and his love was taken from him, he still wishes to have kits of his own. He believes that even he should be allowed to have another chance at being a father. He has a deep and unshakeable belief in Starclan.He respects his clan mates, but will attack trespassers on sight. He can be reasonable and will not endanger his clan. Despite his tough and somewhat dark attitude he cares deeply for his clan, and he will willingly risk all his lives to keep them safe. He often tries to display his authority and is usually the first to speak during a discusion.He does have a soft spot for she cats and kits, but usually avoid him because of his temper and the way he looks.Coalstar will often be the one that starts fights ,and it does not take much to provoke him. His pride in himself and for his clan is his biggest flaw. He will fight to defend them even over petty insults. This is the reason for his many scars all over his body.
History .Coalstar has a broken past and it all started as a kit. Even from this young age Coalstar had a really tough life. During the time when he was born there was a terrible prey shortage due to the Two legs and there monsters. He often went without food and even almost died at just three months old. When he and his siblings were apprenticed the Two legs rarely entered the forest, so prey was plentiful. His mentor was a powerful young she cat named Goldenclaw.She taught him to respect and fight for his clan even if he lost his life. They often spent hours training in the ways of hunting and fighting. His own siblings Gorgepaw and Loudpaw became jealous of the praise that the older warriors would give him, eventhough he never acted above them.
The other apprentices Smallpaw, and Leafpaw often shunned him because they were too shy to talk to him or they were afraid. Several moons later when he and the others had been just mere days away from becoming warriors. The clan was at war with Thunderclan during Leafbare.They had been fighting over Sunning rocks because it was a much needed source of prey. Many of his clanmates had fallen due to lack of food.Both his parents and siblings were fighting with him and Smallpaw,because they were all the clan could spare to fight at the moment.They were heavily out numbered. This was where his life changed forever. The battle became much worse and it was starting to turn bad for Lightningclan.His mother was fighting two Iceclaners at once,and she had taken a very bad belly injury. She was having trouble moving to avoid the two enimies.Her feet hit the slick ice and she fell. For a moment she tried to rise but then on of the enemies clamped there jaws on her neck.Her life covered the ground and she fell dead.Flamefang had looked over during his fight with a small she cat when he saw his mate fell. The furry that gripped his heart made him charge to protect her lifeless body. The same Thunderclanners that had attacked his mother went after his father, overwhelming him in seconds.He soon died from loss of blood.Coalstorm had watched as his parents died right in front of him while he was helping the other apprentices. Now him and his siblings fought with agony and rage that gave them strength. The same cat that killed his mother had bitten and torn his ear ripping it to shreads.Along with Smallpaw they threw back the attack, and returned to camp with their parents battered bodies. When the leader known as Stonestar announced this to the clan he also made them warriors for there bravery, and dedication to there clan.Goldenclaw congratulated them and sat vigil with him and the other apprentices. The very next day he went on a hunting trip with her. He looked at her with new eyes and saw how beautiful she was. They became mates, and he was starting to become happier, but then Leafbare became worse and many cats became sick. His siblings were the first to die from the disease. Next the leader lost a life and the deputy died from greencough. The battle with Iceclanclan became worse and Coalstorm fought often even if he was injured. The hatred for them won against his ability to stay put and heal.Stonestar lost another life to the furry of the Iceclan leader,so he only had three lives left. He gained many of the scars on his back from those battles. The new deputy died while fighting an enemy on patrol. The leader was in despair from losing so many cats, an decided to pick the new deputy later. Around this time his mate and former mentor was pregnant with her first litter.Coalstorm was so proud of his growing family.Goldenclaw and him went for a walk and layed against a tree with there tails entwined. He looked at her and smiled. Suddenly a badger appeared, and it was foaming at the mouth apparently awoken from hunger. It had attacked the two cats in a desperate attempt to eat. Coalstar had tried to fend it off but was almost clawed to bits bye its massive talons.Goldenclaw had also attacked it and threw his bleeding body aside and taunted it so she could lead it away from him. He tried to save her , but just as he bit its neck killing it its claws descended and tore threw her pelt. It dropped dead and Coalstorm stood over her broken body.He wept as he witnessed her blood drain into the snow. He dragged her back into camp and sat vigil for her despite his hideous wounds.Stonestar saw his dedication and had been impressed with him lately, so he ascended High rock and announced him as the new deputy at sundown. He had been training an apprentice named Skypaw.It was his first and only apprentice. She would always wander away from camp, and he caught her leaving a Two legs nest once. He gave her a choice and she chose to stay with them. Next to his other losses Coalstorm was not surprised that he would not have a normal apprentice, but he did not let that stop him from serving the clan.
Several years later the Two legs started to rip through the territories. The clans met at Fourtrees and decided to leave.Coalstorm was glad that the clan had chosen to leave.Remembering all he had lost had made his decision easy. They set out as one joined clan. They came to the first of a series of rather large Thunderpaths,and his leader was the first to cross. He walked out onto the path, and Coalstorm yelled for him to wait just as the monster hit him.Stonestar lay on the thunderpath as another life left him leaving him with just two.Coalstorm helped him off, and lead the rest across. They continued on and came to the mountains. A sharptooth attacked them killing Leafpelt and taking Stonestars last two lives.Coalstorm drove back the Sharptooth making him slip off a cliff to die on the rocks below.Coalstorm told his clan and became leader.
Rp example:The moon is high in the sky.Silverpelt can be seen clearly.Two cats are running towards each other.They clash with there claws unsheathed.They tear at each other relentlessly.There is blood lust in the bigger cats eyes.This is Coalstorm deputy of Riverclan.The other cat jumps away to try and catch its breath,but Coalstorm pursues him.The cat launches unexpectedly at Coalstorm and catches him off balance.The light of the moon shows the cats face.It is the deputy of Thunderclan Razorfang.(Razorfang)"You should leave and run back to your den while you can Coalstorm!"(Coalstorm)"Speak for yourself,because if you continue this battle i will show you no mercy."He pushes Razorfang off of him and then rakes his face with his deadly claws slashing and destroying his right eye.Razorfang runs for it calling the rest of his clan to retreat.Coalstorm announces the victory,and searches for his leader.He had lost track of him during the battle.He sees blood by the cliff edge and looks over.He sees his unmoving leader.He calls the clan and shows them.He collects his body and stands vigil for his dear friend and leader.He asends the Highrock and announces that he will become the new leader.With a heavy heart he retires to his old leaders den to think.